短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練篇一：2015高考英語專題訓(xùn)練——短文改錯(cuò)

專題訓(xùn)練——短文改錯(cuò) 解題技巧

短文改錯(cuò)步驟：

1. 通讀全文，掌握大意 . 2. 逐句推敲，審查，改正錯(cuò)誤 . 3. 復(fù)讀全文，修訂答案 .

短文改錯(cuò)口訣：

動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)，還要注意形和副；非謂語，細(xì)辨別，冠詞連詞常光顧。 代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟；介詞短語需關(guān)注；句子成分多分析，習(xí)慣邏輯要記�。�

歸納短文改錯(cuò)錯(cuò)誤類型:

一、詞法的測試

1.名詞：主要是查名詞是否可數(shù)，與其修飾語是否一致。 Hobby是可數(shù)名詞，在這要用復(fù)數(shù)形式；playing football是一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，football只是一種球； sing和listen to 要用動(dòng)名詞形式。

作運(yùn)動(dòng)講是不可數(shù)名詞，do exercise作主語要用動(dòng)名詞形式，謂動(dòng)用單數(shù)；healthy是形容詞， 這里要用名詞形式。

one of 后的名詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

2. 代詞：對(duì)于短文中出現(xiàn)的每一個(gè)代詞都要查一下它所指代的內(nèi)容及在句中的作用，注意其數(shù)、格、詞性是否正確和前后是否一致，�？嫉拇�詞包括人稱代詞、指示代詞、反身代詞、關(guān)系代詞及疑問代詞等。

1).He drove too fast, and the police stopped her.

前面提到的是he而后面卻用her來代，故應(yīng)將her改為him.2).This is the best film which I have ever seen.

先行詞前有最高級(jí)修飾應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞that 而不是which。

3. 冠詞：英語中只有三個(gè)冠詞，但用起來卻很復(fù)雜，在短文改錯(cuò)中，錯(cuò)誤不外乎該用冠詞時(shí)沒有用，不該用時(shí)卻用了；該用an用了a，該用a(n)卻用了the.

1) I meant to write letter and tell you all the things… letter為可數(shù)名詞,故write后應(yīng)加a. 2) I like playing the football. 去the 3) He is a honest boy. a改為an

4. 介詞：檢查介詞主要是查介詞與動(dòng)詞、形容詞、名詞的搭配，介詞慣用詞組等是否正確。 1) I am writing to thank you with your kind help. thank sb. for sth.為固定搭配，故應(yīng)將with 改為for. 2) …I’m the happiest in all.

此句想表達(dá)的意思是“我是所有人中最高興的”。故應(yīng)將in改為 of.3) Under the help of my father, I …under 改為 with4) He went to Beijing in next Sunday.in 改為on

5.形容詞、副詞：形容詞、副詞的誤用主要指在該用形容詞的地方用了副詞，該用副詞的地方用了形容詞。改錯(cuò)行中出現(xiàn)形容詞或副詞時(shí)就要仔細(xì)分析該形容詞或副詞修飾什么，形式是否正確，是原級(jí)、比較級(jí)還是最高級(jí)。形容詞、副詞誤用也是�？嫉母腻e(cuò)項(xiàng)目之一。

1) I had not interest in English .interest是名詞，應(yīng)用形容詞no來修飾，而not是副詞，副詞不能修飾名

2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007)

此處有I’ve ever seen限定，應(yīng)用最高級(jí)，故happier應(yīng)改為 happiest. 3) You can borrow a book very easy.easy 改為easily. 4) These books are very worth reading.用well 修飾

6. 連詞：短文改錯(cuò)中出現(xiàn)連詞就要判斷連詞用的是否正確，是否符合句子意思；連接的是詞還是句子，是否符合邏輯關(guān)系。此外如果是平行結(jié)構(gòu)就要注意前后時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、詞性一致問題平行結(jié)構(gòu)常借助與并列連詞and , or , but , not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等。

1) As it has been raining these days, so we have decided to put off our sports meeting. 由于前句有As引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，因此后句不能再用so,故應(yīng)把so 去掉。 2) The population is growing, but the earth must support too many people. 根據(jù)上下文意思判斷，前后兩個(gè)并列分句不存在意義上的折，

所以but應(yīng)改為and或so.這是典型的并列連詞誤用。

7. 動(dòng)詞：動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中所占比重最大，它所涉及的錯(cuò)誤包括動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤；易混動(dòng)詞的用法錯(cuò)誤; 動(dòng)詞的第三人稱單數(shù)錯(cuò)誤；動(dòng)詞的非謂語形式，以及動(dòng)詞的句型搭配錯(cuò)誤等。在改錯(cuò)題中，動(dòng)詞方面的考查比例較大。

1) 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

a. I will write again and send you the photos we take together. take photos動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)用過去時(shí).

b. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.根據(jù)本句意義，should后應(yīng)加上been，構(gòu)成被動(dòng)語態(tài)。 c. In school, I often playing football for my friends.playing改為 play; for 改為with 2) 易混動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤

a. I persuaded him to stop smoking, but he didn’t listen.

persuade 意為“說服”，強(qiáng)調(diào)成功的結(jié)果，而根據(jù)下句 he didn’t listen可知，勸說并沒有成功，故應(yīng)改persuaded為 advised. b. You please rise your hands.

rise是不及物動(dòng)詞，而raise是及物動(dòng)詞，所以舉手應(yīng)用

raise your hands.這屬于及物動(dòng)詞與不及物動(dòng)詞的誤用。 3) 非謂語動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤

a. We are looking forward to see you on the birthday party.

look forward to 中的to是介詞，應(yīng)加動(dòng)名詞，將see改為seeing.

b. I’m sorry I keep you wait for a long time .I got caught in the traffic. 在任何情況下keep均和doing連用，如keep doing sth.;

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keep sb. (sth).doing sth. ;keep …from doing… 等.

c. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country. to后加be。因其后是名詞，而不是動(dòng)詞原形，不能直接用to.

8. 詞語固定搭配:主要考查介詞與動(dòng)詞、名詞、形容詞的固定搭配；副詞、動(dòng)詞的固定搭配；及物動(dòng)詞后多介詞或副詞以及不及物動(dòng)詞后少介詞，英語中的一些固定句型與習(xí)慣搭配等。

1) My teacher advised me to keep my diary. keep a diary是固定搭配，意思是“寫日記”. 2) In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job.To one’s surprise 是固定搭配

3) I thought that was dull to watch a game…(NMET2005) 此題考查it的功能，It + be + adj. + to do為固定結(jié)構(gòu)。 4) …the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful.解析： not only… but also…為固定結(jié)構(gòu)，故將and 改為but. 5) I have no difficulty learn maths. have difficulty (in) doing sth.為固定結(jié)構(gòu) 6) He spends too much time play games. spend some time (in) doing sth.為固定結(jié)構(gòu) 二、 句法的測試：

1主謂語在數(shù)上的一致； I hope everything are ok with you. are 改為is 2名詞性從句的考查；

A man came up to him and asked that he needed. that是連詞，在從句中無任何意義，而后面的賓語從句缺賓語，用what引導(dǎo)賓語從句作賓語從句的賓語。

3定語從句的考查；

This would save the life of many animals, some of then have almost died out.—them改為 which 4、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型；It is/was +被強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分+that/who… It was in 1949 when he joined the army. when改為that 5、句子結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性、完整性、對(duì)等性及邏輯性。 三、 語篇的測試 語篇的測試包括： 1上下文中的時(shí)態(tài)是否一致； 2上下文中的代詞是否一致； 3上下文中的邏輯是否一致；

4上下文中的詞、詞組、從句的替代是否正確。 四、四不改原則

1. 單詞拼寫不改 . 2. 大小寫不改 .3. 詞序不改 .4. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改 . 注意問題：

短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)改“錯(cuò)”，而不是把文中的表達(dá)法改成另外的表達(dá)形式。很多考生對(duì)這個(gè)概念比較模糊。把原文中并沒有錯(cuò)的形式改成了自己認(rèn)可的另外一種形式，雖然改后的表達(dá)法也是對(duì)的，但這樣做偏離了這類題型的答題要求，因而也不能得分。

臨場應(yīng)試技巧 : 做短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)只要記住“三歩”，“六原則和“四不改”就能提高得分率。

短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練 1

Dear David,

I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can’t stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It’s time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.

Looking forward to your reply!

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Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

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My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

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Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back

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to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

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Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.

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Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get . Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

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This morning I found red wallet on the campus. Girls usual like red, so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. I opened it, try to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300 yuan in it. I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by. She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so. I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. Later, a girl came to claim it on 3 o’clock this afternoon.

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Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.

短文改錯(cuò)答題技巧

高考英語短文改錯(cuò)主要考查識(shí)別錯(cuò)誤并改正錯(cuò)誤的能力和在語篇中綜合運(yùn)用英語的準(zhǔn)確性和熟練程度。高考試題一般按1：1：2：6的規(guī)律，即正確一行，缺詞一行，多詞二行，錯(cuò)詞6行來設(shè)題。 （一）技巧點(diǎn)撥

1．注意分行的技巧性。上一行的末尾和下一行的開始，往往是考生們?nèi)菀缀鲆暤牡胤剑�不易找到錯(cuò)

誤所在，從而影響了改錯(cuò)的成績�？忌�要密切關(guān)注行尾和行首的接連處，注意它們之間的語法關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系，盡快找到設(shè)錯(cuò)點(diǎn)，從而盡快改正。

2．要以句子為單位而不是以單詞為單位進(jìn)行判斷。改錯(cuò)題的要求是每行找出一處錯(cuò)誤，但在找錯(cuò)時(shí)

不能以單詞為單位來找，要以完整的句子為語言單位進(jìn)行判斷。

3．注重上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系。在短文改錯(cuò)題中，有時(shí)設(shè)錯(cuò)的內(nèi)容與短文上下評(píng)議的時(shí)態(tài)人稱等有

密切的關(guān)系，如果只從一個(gè)單句來考慮，而不關(guān)注上下文的各種邏輯關(guān)系，就可能造成判斷失誤，增加失分的因素。

4．在逐行尋查錯(cuò)誤時(shí)應(yīng)著重注意看句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整，看習(xí)慣用法固定搭配是否正確，看上下文邏

輯是否合理，看主謂是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，冠詞、代詞、連詞、形容詞、副詞以及關(guān)系詞的使用是否得當(dāng)。

（二）近幾年的高考試題語法設(shè)題項(xiàng)目分布

1. 名詞和限制詞的搭配。主要涉及可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞與冠詞、指示代詞、物主代詞的錯(cuò)誤搭配，以及

名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)的誤用。

2. 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)以及非謂語動(dòng)詞。常出現(xiàn)在總體時(shí)態(tài)為過去或現(xiàn)在時(shí)中間雜有另一時(shí)態(tài)的現(xiàn)象，

以及動(dòng)詞的謂語與非謂語形式、非謂語動(dòng)詞之間的誤用。

3. 代詞的誤用。主要是代詞的格與數(shù)的錯(cuò)用。如男性用了女性代詞，單數(shù)用了復(fù)數(shù)代詞或相反；應(yīng)當(dāng)

用形容詞性的物主代詞用了名詞性等。

4. 數(shù)詞的誤用主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用，以及hundred, thousand, dozen, score等詞和具體

數(shù)量詞連用時(shí)的用法以及表示約數(shù)的用法。

5. 形容詞與副詞辨析主要涉及到形容詞和副詞的原級(jí)、比較級(jí)與最高級(jí)的誤用，以及形容詞和副詞的

誤用等。

6. 考查英語中的并列現(xiàn)象在一些英語中的并列結(jié)構(gòu)中沒有用并列的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如并列連詞連接的兩個(gè)

部分等。

7. 考查上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。如：but, and, so，however, otherwise等一些并列連詞和連接副詞的誤用。

before, after, when, until, since等狀語從句引導(dǎo)詞的誤用等。還有肯定和否定的誤用等。 8. 一些相似結(jié)構(gòu)的誤用。如：used to do, be used to do, be used to doing等結(jié)構(gòu)的誤用。 9. 慣用法的搭配。如：動(dòng)詞短語look at /pay attention to /listen to 等固定用法。 （三）解題步驟

做短文改錯(cuò)題時(shí)一般遵循以下幾個(gè)步驟：

1. 先通讀全文。認(rèn)真閱讀短文，在做題之前確保已經(jīng)弄清原文大意。注意文章中上下文的邏輯關(guān)系是否正確，時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、主謂、指代等是否一致。

2. 聚焦出題熱點(diǎn)，綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識(shí)，對(duì)不同的錯(cuò)誤情況進(jìn)行分析和解答(即改詞、加詞或減詞)。 3. 再次通讀全文，校對(duì)自己的改正是否正確。一般各種改錯(cuò)的方式都應(yīng)該用到，如果出現(xiàn)了某一種改法(如加詞、減詞等)沒有用到，要考慮自己的改錯(cuò)應(yīng)該有問題，要對(duì)剛才不是很有把握的行進(jìn)行推敲。在自己認(rèn)為正確的行后劃勾，并且校對(duì)其他行改正的符號(hào)是否準(zhǔn)確，大小寫是否拼寫正確(這點(diǎn)

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同學(xué)們很容易忽視)。如果某一行有兩種改錯(cuò)方式要推敲哪一種是最佳改法。

people, not the young alone

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I hadn’t seen Mr. Chen since I left school four years ago76. _______ but I often think of him. I wasn’t very well at most 77. _______ subjects. I suppose I was a bit of lazy and now I wish I’d 78. _______ done more work, especially maths. The only thing I can79. _______

短文改錯(cuò)口訣：

時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)主謂病，可不可數(shù)在動(dòng)名；介連冠詞設(shè)多少，區(qū)別搭配與誤用； 形副級(jí)別與詞性，代詞三格要分明；行文邏輯應(yīng)順通，斟詞酌句處處功！

短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

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短文改錯(cuò)

To my opinion．there are advantages and disadvantages 76．____________ remember is that the angles of a triangle adds up to 18080. _______ degree! But when I went into Mr. Chen’s class, I really 81. _______ became interesting in a subject for the first time. Before Mr. 82. _______ traveling both by plane atld by train．Travel by plane is time-saving，comfortably，and you can have a good reston the trip．but it is too expensive．Unless you travel bytrain．it is not expensive and quite safety and you callappreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of therailway．However，it was too crowded and time-wasting，and we can take a good rest．So you can see everycoin has two sides．You’d better to choose either ofthem depending on your own interest or economy．

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A disabled person who wanted to go shopping in thiscity will find difficult to do so. If the person has serious visual problems, finding the store is almost possible. The signs are small and difficult to see, or all the streets are not marked to help someone who is blind. If the person is from a wheelchair, he or she will not be able to get into the stores, because the ground is higher than the sidewalk and anyone who goes in or out must cross through a narrow gate. Inside the store, passages are not wider enough for a wheelchair.3.

As the development of the Internet, more and

more people tend to send out e-cards instead of paper ones to their friends when important holiday comes.Comparing with traditional cards, e-cards are lively

and interesting. They can give us not pictures but sounds as well. However, it is faster to send an e-card. Thereis a variety of cards online you can choose from. With thepopularity of e-cards, less paper is used as making paper

cards, it is better for our environment. In short, I hopesending greetings using e-cards will be accepted by more

77．____________ 78．____________ 79．____________ 80．____________ 81．____________ 82．____________ 83．____________ 84．____________ 85．____________

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77._________ 78._________ 79._________

80._________ 81._________ 82._________ 83._________

84._________ 85._________

Chen, science had been simply a subject full of strange 83. _______ words to me. I had no idea how a cell was and I didn’t 84. _______ want to know either! I found it all so boring but difficult. But Mr. Chen made everything interesting.

5.

Yesterday afternoon I went to Hongshi Park. It happens that I saw 76．__________ a touched event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake.77．__________ Among whom was a happy family. They were taking photos 78．__________ while suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was

79．__________ struggling but her parents cried out, “Help! Help!” It was

80．__________ obviously that they could not swim at all. From nearby a young man 81．__________

immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he

jumped into water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already 82．__________ tired out. At last he carried her to the lake bank. She was saved!

83．__________ How happy the parent were! Before they thought

84．__________

thanking the young man, he had disappeared.

85．__________

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In the first day when I went to work in a very famous76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few77．___________ people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________

the restaurant. After ordering two French dishes and some food,

79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the

80．___________

meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes83．___________ passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________

reasons why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.

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It is Sunday. Li Ming is busy working his lessons

76. __________ in the afternoon in home. At break, he relaxes by the 77. __________ window expect to enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy 78. __________ traffic seem to remind him of something. As a

79. __________ senior 3 student, facing with NMET, time is more or 80. __________ less limited for him. He thinks he must plan everything 81. __________ careful in order to solve the remaining problems with 82. __________ his lessons and prepared for the coming exam. Meanwhile,

83. __________ he has to take good care of him. Li Ming is determined

84. __________

to try his best so that he will achieve a success.85. __________

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Climbing is my favorite sport．I am very fond it, 76．_________ especially in later autumn．One day early in the morning, 77．_________ my friends and I put our sports shoes and started off．78．_________ After climbing for half an hour, we got at the top of79．_________ the mountain. There we have a good view miles around． 80．_________ To the north, a big river crossed the city. There were many 81．_________ ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful trees were there, too. 82．_________ The sun started to go down, but it was time for us 83．_________ to go back. In the way back, we were laughing and 84．_________ talking all the time. We had a good time on that day． 85．_________

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Mr. Huang is sixty year old. He has retired. He taught us 76． English when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old, and 77． he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr. 78． Huang usually made well preparations for the lessons and was 79． strict with us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, 80． he would ask us to correct it. At one time, I was rather poor in 81． English. Mr. Huang often helps me with my study very82． patiently. With his help, I made a great progress and caught83． up the class. He was always very kind to every student. As an 84． experiencing teacher, he was respected and loved by all the students. 85．

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The first fact I worry is noise pollution. People can't sleep 76．_________ well if there is too much noise. That's why such many people77．_________ prefer to live in the countryside rather than living in noisy cities.78．_________ I suggest all the factories and cars not make terrible noise. Although79．_________ they make terrible noise that are not allowed, they should be fined, 80．_________ and we can also produce cars which don't make terrible noise. 81．_________ Another pollution is rubbish pollution. If nobody makes so much 82．_________ rubbish, one day we may live in a world filling with rubbish. 83．_________ Some people throw waste paper about. I suggested rubbish 84．_________ should be put into different kinds of dustbins or papers bags.85．_________

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Last summer I was considering how I can make a contribution 76．__________ to the 2008 Olympics. Finally, I realize my wish during 77．__________ my 19-day tour of America. Stayed with my host family， 78．__________ an old couple in Tucson, US, I came up an idea. Wouldn’t79．__________ that be a good opportunity to spread the message of the 80．__________ Olympics to these two Americans? To my surprised, they 81．__________ were real interested in my idea. So I decided to give them a82．__________ speech. Apart from a brief introduction to the Beijing Olympic83．__________ Games, and I offered them other information about Chinese 84．__________ culture. I also invited them to pay visit to Beijing in 2008. 85．_________

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One evening two young men were walking in the street.

They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock 76. __________ strikes twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came 77. __________ to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen 78. __________ sleeping. Standing at the front gate, one man said in English to 79. __________ the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to 80. __________ the front door and then get into the house.” Suddenly out of the 81. __________ house ran a dog, barking at them. The two men were very afraid 82. __________ and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they 83. __________ had got to a lonely place. One man said to the other in surprise, 84. __________ “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could understand English.” 85. __________ 敘事類的2篇：

13. Dinner on Children's Day On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, 76. _________ in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. 77. _________ In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the 78. _________ poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). Parents 79. _________ both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They 80. _________ hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner.81. _________

Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. _________ Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. _________ The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. _________ differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. _________ know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.

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It was fine while I got up early last Saturday morning. 76. __________

So I decided to go hiking and took some photos in the77. __________ beautiful country. After breakfast, I took my camera with 78. __________ me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip 79. __________ so much that I didn’t realize the weather had been turned 80. __________ bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught81. __________ in rain and was wet through. I kept on running until

82. __________

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短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練篇二：高中英語短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

下面短文中每篇各有10處錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

Passage 1

It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of thestreet． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road． He fell with a cry． The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864． After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．

Passage 2

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

Passage 3

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.

Customer

Li Ming

Passage 4

I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.

Passage 5

I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(實(shí)例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.

Passage 6

Dear Susan,

I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

Passage 7

Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even

communicate some college students freely.

Passage 8

If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.

Passage 9

Dear Mary,

I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Passage 10

Dear Ralph,

I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,

but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one

to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find

they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve

become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I

felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this

sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?

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短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練篇三：高一英語短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)練習(xí)

高一英語短文改錯(cuò)專題練習(xí)（10篇）

答題要求：此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾(√)；如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正：

此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。 此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。 此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。

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While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick.A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. Hetook me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office. and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this e

xperience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all.

B

The Internet is playing a important part in?????? our daily life. On the net, we can learn about?????? news both home and abroad and some other?????????informations as well．We can also make phone calls，??? send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and??????learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we?????can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the????chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，???? make a chat with others and make friends with them．????In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．?? C

A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it.

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1. _______________ 2. _______________ 3. _______________ 4. _______________ 5. _______________ 6. _______________ 7. _______________ 8. _______________ 9. _______________ 10. ______________ 81． ＿＿＿＿＿ 82． ＿＿＿＿＿ 83． ＿＿＿＿＿ 84． ＿＿＿＿＿ 85． ＿＿＿＿＿ 86． ＿＿＿＿＿ 87． ＿＿＿＿＿ 88． ＿＿＿＿＿ 89． ＿＿＿＿＿ 90． ＿＿＿＿＿

81. 82. 83. 84. 85. 86. 87. 88. 89. 90.

D

I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, you’ll finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be.E

During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It isboth cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience has shown that traveling in air isactually the safest way of make journeys. F

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was afine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachersattend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 secondsand broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we wereall trying to do my best.Althought I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours, Li Ping

G

A group of scientists were planning to go

to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country

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81. ________________ 82. ________________ 83. ________________ 84. ________________ 85. ________________ 86. ________________ 87. ________________ 88. ________________ 89. ________________ 90. ________________

81、_________________ 82、_________________ 83、_________________ 84、_________________ 85、_________________ 86、_________________ 87、_________________ 88、_________________

、_________________ 90、_________________

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had polluted．On arrival，they started to check the air and water．To our surprise，they found how terribly the situation was． They could see the serious pollution． Look into the cause，they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance ofnature． Now everything has changed． Birds are singing while tree and grass are waving．

H

One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately.She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to thekitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. I

I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, who lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to herhotel. While go there, I told her about great changesthat had been taken place here in the past few yearsand she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practicedmy spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him.

J

10 I live in a small town in the south. This is typical Chinese town. There are not only two main streetswhich across in the middle of the town. Around thetown stand a high wall, which was built long ago, and it is still possibly to walk along it. No motorcarsallowed in the business streets, which makes shoppingvery easier and safer. On warm days some small restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses tolet people to take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream. There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks.

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Keys:

A) 71. traveled-traveling 72. well-dressing---well-dressed 73. office 后加was74. 去to75.can’t--- couldn’t 76. 去but 77. myself- my 78. to—for79. healthy--- health 80.√

B) 81. a→an 82.√ 83．home前加at 84．informations→information85．e-mails→e-mail 86．Beside→Besides 87．去掉the 88．help→helps 89．第一個(gè)make→have 90．more→much

C)81. returning 后加to 82. have→had 83. good→well 84. interested→interesting 85. √ 86.one→a 87. their→his 88. 去掉to 89. funs→fun 90. 去掉it

D)81. was前加that或去掉was 82. greatly前加are 83. 去掉how 84. After→In

85. 去掉the 86. √87. what→how 88. wished→wish 89. full→fuller 90. certain→certainly

E)1.在the first time 前加for 2. and →or 3. safe→safer 4. happily→happy 5. longer→long 6.cloud→ clouds 7.interested →interesting 8. √9. in→by10. make→ making

F)1、去掉more2、holding改held3、正確 4、attend改attending 5、finish改finished 6、去掉in7、success前加a8、my改our 9、winner改winners 10、that改what

G) 81．countryside 前加the 82．去掉that 83． polluted前加been 84． our改their 85．terribly改terrible 86．look改 looking 87．persuade 改persuaded 88．kept改 keep 89．正確90．tree改trees

H) 76.as---when 77.rings---rang 78.She---It 79.a---the 80.was full 81.opening ---opened 82.In---To 83.√ 84.about 去掉 85.which---that

I) 81、film 前的 the 改為 a82、lost 前加 had83、see 前加 to 84、go 改為 going 85、去掉 been 86、去掉 had 87、去掉 but 88、正確 89、on 改為 at 90、him 改為 her

J) 61.typical前加a 62.去掉not 63.across→cross 64.stand→stands 65.possibly→possible 66.allowed前加are 67.very→much 68.table→tables 69.去掉to 70.√

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