短文改錯口訣
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短文改錯口訣篇一:高考英語短文改錯口訣
高考英語短文改錯口訣
為了提高做短文改錯題的能力,除了要加強(qiáng)基礎(chǔ)知識的積累、提高語篇的整體理解能力之外,還應(yīng)該對其錯項(xiàng)設(shè)置的基本情況有所了解,以便做到目標(biāo)明確,有的放矢,從而提高解題的正確率。本文擬從語法和邏輯的角度,用口訣的形式,向同學(xué)們介紹高考英語短文改錯中最常見的幾類錯誤。
短文改錯口訣:
動詞形,名詞數(shù);
注意形和副;
非謂動詞細(xì)辨別;
習(xí)慣用法要記;
句子成分多分析;
邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注。
一. 動詞形
主要包括兩類錯誤:動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤,以及主、謂不一致的錯誤。例如: My favourite sport is football. I was member of our school football team. (is) Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are)
上述兩例分別屬于時態(tài)錯誤和主、謂不一致錯誤。找出此類錯誤的關(guān)鍵是樹立牢固的時態(tài)概念,注意短文內(nèi)容發(fā)生或存在的時間,保持時間概念的一致性。
二. 名詞數(shù)
指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。常表現(xiàn)為將名詞復(fù)數(shù)寫成單數(shù)。例如:
…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects)
三. 區(qū)分形和副
及區(qū)分形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用法。 這也是高考短文改錯的常考點(diǎn)。例如:
I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful)
Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately)
需要注意的是,形容詞多用來做定、表、補(bǔ)語等,而副詞只能在句子中作狀語,修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞或整個句子。第一例中的wonderful作定語修飾time,第二句的Unfortunately作狀語修飾整個句子。
四. 非謂動詞細(xì)辨別
這是考查最多的錯誤形式之一。主要有分詞和動名詞類錯誤,也包括不定式類錯誤。例如:
…in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. (interested)
Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also … (playing) My parents love me… and will do all they can ∧ make sure… (to)
上述二、三例分別是動名詞作主語,和不定式作目的狀語。一般的,現(xiàn)在分詞有主動態(tài)和進(jìn)行時的含義,而過去分詞具有被動態(tài)和完成時的含義,不定式有將來時態(tài)的含義。
五. 習(xí)慣用法要記住
主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識。這也是歷年高考的?键c(diǎn),其錯誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種:多詞、少詞和搭配錯誤。 例如:
It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and… (of)
We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves. (of)
六. 句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類;不同的語景要選擇不同的詞語。這些都有待我們對句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子成分作細(xì)致的分析,才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e誤。例如:
They ∧eager to know everything about China and… (were)
I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (which)
第一例漏掉了謂語動詞were,這是受寒于習(xí)慣的影響而導(dǎo)致的錯誤;第二例則是詞類與它在句子中的成分不相符,where是副詞,不能作主語。
七. 邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注
與句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,屬于邏輯性錯誤。如稱謂上的張冠李戴,人名、地名、時間、方位等方面的錯誤,常是這類錯誤的考查對象。例如:
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (their)
First, let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉more)
… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. (everyone)
上述第一例中的主語是Smiths(史密斯夫婦倆),因此后面的his不合邏輯。第二例中的more在這兒表“再”的意思,才開始告訴別人,怎么能說“再告訴你一些事”?第三例講的是為了解決看電視時的爭端,“我們”把電視機(jī)賣了;晚上沒電視看了,所以與從前一
樣,大家又都讀書了,所以該用everyone。
除了上述錯誤類型外,?嫉腻e誤形式還有:連詞but, and, or和so的用法錯誤(可以歸類為邏輯錯誤),以及冠詞的用法錯誤等。例如:
She was smiling but nodding at me. (and)
It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. (or)
We may be one family and live under a same roof. (the)
下面是2002年全國高考試題中的短文改錯題。這道題較全面地反映了本文的口訣,F(xiàn)在請你試著做一做,然后參閱題后的答案與簡析。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows,it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain,the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain,we ed monkeys,visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.
答案與簡析:
76. famous前加上a.(名詞數(shù))
77. 正確
78. we前面加when,引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句。(句子成分多分析)
79. them→us (邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注)
80. visiting→visited(非謂動詞細(xì)辨別)
81. picture→pictures(名詞數(shù))
82. passes→passed(動詞形)
83. 去掉down(習(xí)慣用法要記。
84. and→but(but,and,or和so)
85. 去掉at(句子成分多分析 / 習(xí)慣用法要記。
改錯要想拿高分
語法口訣要記牢
(一) 見到謂語找主語,主謂一致找狀語
見到名詞想多數(shù),可不可數(shù)要記牢
見到平行看結(jié)構(gòu),形式功能要對稱
見到代詞找指代,指代通常不合理
帶賓語必帶to,不帶賓語不帶 to
短文改錯口訣篇二:英語短文改錯順口溜
英語短文改錯順口溜
短文改錯很簡單,名詞動詞兩主線;
每句話為一單位,錯誤藏在句子間;
名詞可數(shù)不可數(shù),形式是復(fù)還是單;
動詞及物不及物,有無賓語在后邊;
何種時態(tài)弄清楚,主動被動需判斷;
非謂動詞何形式,作何成分是關(guān)鍵;
形容副詞互擾亂,何種級別是重點(diǎn);
冠詞用冠不用冠,定冠還是不定冠;
代詞指代要一致,定賓主表認(rèn)真選;
從句連詞要判斷,做不做成分仔細(xì)看;
遇到and要判斷,到底并列還是選轉(zhuǎn);
若為并列就不變,若轉(zhuǎn)but來更換;
介詞副詞按短語,習(xí)慣用法按習(xí)慣;
前后文章要連貫,審后沒錯對號添。
短文改錯不難做,首先解題要沉著;
先看名詞單復(fù)數(shù),再看代詞是否錯;
動詞時態(tài)是關(guān)鍵,過去現(xiàn)在須分辨;
及物動詞后有賓,不及賓前定有介;
副詞修飾形副動,名詞前面常用形;
連詞不能胡亂用,轉(zhuǎn)折承接須分清;
固定搭配很重要,句意也須心中曉。
牢記上述八大條,做起題來快又好。
一看一致二詞類,三多四少五搭配,六句七語八非謂,九看邏輯對不對,拼寫無誤便全對。
1. “一致”,指一致性方面的錯誤,包括主謂一致、時態(tài)一致、代詞一致等。如: All he said were right. (謂語動詞要與主語的數(shù)保持一致,應(yīng)把were改成was)
2. “詞類”,指詞法,包括同義詞、反義詞、易混詞;名詞的可數(shù)與不可數(shù)、單復(fù)數(shù)及所有格;代詞的格;定語從句中先行詞和關(guān)系代詞的誤用;名詞性從句中連接詞的誤用;比較范圍的錯誤。如:
We should remember what we all learnt our own language when we were children. (what應(yīng)改為that)
She found a wallet laying on the ground. (laying應(yīng)改為lying)
3. “多”,指多詞,句中多了主語、謂語、冠詞、介詞、副詞等。如:
This river is much more longer than that one. (多了副詞more)
From his answer we shall know the something now. (不定代詞前不加冠詞,故去掉the)
4. “少”,指少詞,句中少了主語、謂語、冠詞、介詞、副詞等。如:
Then I began to pay more attention my pronunciation. ( attention 后缺少介詞to)
5. “搭配”,指固定搭配。如:
We could learn a second language by the same way. ( 固定搭配應(yīng)為in the same way)
6.“句”,指句型結(jié)構(gòu)。如:
Long ago there had a war between the two countries. (表“存在”的句型應(yīng)為there be + 主語,故把had改為was)
7. “語”,指語態(tài)。如:
He broke the law and punished. (punished 前加was)
8. “非謂”, 指非謂語動詞。如:
Scientists like Newton and Watt were usually interesting in these facts. (interesting 改為 interested)
9. “邏輯”,指文章的邏輯意義,句與句、段與段之間使用的承接詞是轉(zhuǎn)折型、遞增型還是因果型,以及受空間、時間限定的詞語的使用。如:
This is a lie, and his parents did not know. (兩句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折型,and改為but)
10. “拼寫”,指單詞拼寫錯誤。如:
The hurricane destroied the houses along the coast. (destroied 改為destroyed
一、解題思路(三步解題法):
第一步、快速瀏覽全文,把握文章的主要時態(tài)、人稱及文章的主旨大意,順便標(biāo)記自己一眼就能看出的錯誤。
第二步、細(xì)讀文章的每一句話。一般要結(jié)合文章的前后句以及出題規(guī)律來做題。 第三步、代入已經(jīng)修改完成的答案通讀全文,看其是否通順。
注意:在修改過程當(dāng)中,一定要相信自己的第一感覺。即一般來說,第一次填寫的答案正確率比較高,沒有十足地把握不易輕易改正!
二、出題規(guī)律以及破解關(guān)鍵:
高考短文改錯出題人一般會在以下八個方面進(jìn)行出題。掌握出題規(guī)律之后做題便會事半功倍!
1.動詞:
(1)主要考察能力:時態(tài)、主謂是否一致、固定搭配。
(2)出題形式:
①時態(tài)混用
ie, Then the trouble started. We can not open the door. So we asked the policeman for help.
講解:很顯然此句子主時態(tài)是一般過去式,因此應(yīng)把can改為could。
②主謂不一致
ie, There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening.
講解:原句中a football game決定了謂語動詞必須用單數(shù),所以應(yīng)該把were改為was。 ③固定搭配
ie, I have given up somke. The dog doesn’t like the smell.
講解:give up doing sth。因此動詞somke應(yīng)該改為somking。
2.名詞:
(1)主要考察能力:單復(fù)數(shù)混用。
(2)出題形式:
單復(fù)數(shù)混用
ie, Helen is seventeen year old. She is very busy.
講解:“年齡多大了”應(yīng)該為復(fù)數(shù)形式,應(yīng)此應(yīng)該把year改為years。
注意:代詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用類似。
ie, As for a friendship, we can readily find them in our classmates and other people around us.
講解:顯然因該把them改為it,指代前面提及的friendship。此句話意思是“就友誼來說,我們可以很容易地從我們的同學(xué)和周圍的人中找到!
3.形容詞/副詞
(1)主要考察能力:兩者之間是否混用。
(2)出題形式:
形容詞與副詞混用。即該用形容詞的地方原文用了副詞,該用副詞的地方原文用了形容詞。 ①副詞代替正確形容詞出現(xiàn)在文章當(dāng)中
ie, During the football season, Helen is much busier than usually.
講解:很明顯“與平時相比較更忙”,因此需要把usually改為usual。
②形容詞代替正確副詞出現(xiàn)在文章當(dāng)中
ie, As the time clock showed one minute and forty-two seconds leaft in the game, she began cheering excited, “Come on-get going!”
講解:原文意思是說比賽還剩一分四十二秒時,她開始興奮地叫道-----,顯然應(yīng)把excited改為excitedly,用來修飾動詞cheer。
4.介詞
(1)主要考察能力:(特別是與動詞的)固定搭配。
(2)出題形式:
①介詞省略
ie, I’m surt you will get rid the sorrow and unhappiness caused by the disaster. 講解:get rid of 是固定搭配,意思為“擺脫,除去”
②介詞多余
ie,My wife is also happy because of I have given up smoking.
講解:這里顯然示對because of與because用法的辨別區(qū)分。前者不能接句子,而后者充當(dāng)連詞可以接句子。所以應(yīng)該把of去掉。
③介詞用錯(一般為固定搭配)
ie, I pick out her false hair and said, “Don’t be sad, Miss.”
講解:pick out應(yīng)該為pick up。pick out挑選的意思;pick up撿起的意思。
5.連詞
(1)主要考察能力:前后兩句話之間的銜接關(guān)系。
?既N關(guān)系:
but轉(zhuǎn)折
and并列
because原因
①ie, One day, my wife and I went shopping at a store. We drove the car but we had a lot of things to buy.
講解:顯然原文中所要表達(dá)的意思是“我們開車去的原因是因?yàn)槲覀円I好多東西”,所以應(yīng)該把but改為because/as/for。
②ie,Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, but improve their English if they are talking with native speakers.
講解:原文表達(dá)的意思是“通過網(wǎng)上聊天,學(xué)生能夠更加輕松自由地表達(dá)自己的想法和觀點(diǎn),并且如果他們同外國人交談,能夠提高他們的英語水平。”所以前后句之間是并列關(guān)系,因該把but改為and.
6.句式
(1)主要考察能力:?紅hat與what或which/how與what之間的轉(zhuǎn)換。
(2)出題形式:
①ie, She never has enough time for that she wants to do.
講解:原文意思是“她沒有足夠多的時間來做自己想做的事情”,很明顯應(yīng)該把that改為what。
注意:這一形式是改錯?键c(diǎn)。
②ie, We Chinese people have always been concerned about which has happened in your area.
講解:原文中需要一個連接詞承接前后連個句子,這個連接詞充當(dāng)be concerned about引導(dǎo)賓語從句中的主語,所以應(yīng)該把which改為what。
7. 冠詞
(1)主要考察能力:句中冠詞是否多余
(2)出題形式:
①冠詞多余
ie, I sat in the front of the TV at 7 o’clock, when the game just began.
講解:區(qū)分in front of sth和in the front of sth。解決這個問題記住一句順口溜就可以了“有the是內(nèi)無the是外”,即in the front of sth顯然是指在事物(sth)內(nèi)部空間的前面,比如說I prefer to travel in the front of the car.(我愿意坐在汽車的前面);而in front of sth是指事物(sth)外部空間的前面,比如說the car stops in front of the house(汽車停在房前)。因此原文中應(yīng)該把the去掉。
②冠詞遺漏
ie, As we all left home at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life.
講解:at an ---- age固定搭配詞組,表示“出于---年齡”,比如說at an early/tender age,可以翻譯為“很小/年幼的時候”
8.代詞
(1)主要考察能力:代詞是否多余,以及與反身代詞之間的混用。
(2)出題形式:
①代詞多余
ie, Don’t lose your heart. With the help of the people all over the world, I’m sure you will get rid of the sorrow and unhappiness.
講解:lose heart:become discouraged泄氣;喪失勇氣;而lose one’s heart(to sb/st):fall in love愛上;鐘情于。原文意思很明顯是“別泄氣”。所以應(yīng)該把your去掉。一字之差,離題千里。
②代詞混用
ie, We were living in a big family. We treate each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of them had any difficulty, the other would help him or her out.
講解: 原文意思是說“我們生活在一個大家庭之中,彼此間相處如同兄弟姐妹。如果我們之中誰有困難,其他人就會幫助他/她解決困難!彼詰(yīng)把them改為us;把other改為others。 注意:the other表示兩者之中“另一個”; the others表示在一個范圍內(nèi)的其他全部。如圖所示:
③代詞遺漏
ie, A teacher could make classes lively and interesting.
講解: 應(yīng)該在classes前加his,表示“使他的課堂生動有趣”。
短文改錯口訣篇三:短文改錯口訣(終極版)
改錯解題口訣
改錯錯點(diǎn)三字經(jīng)冠名動 形副邏 介連代
動有形 名有數(shù)
形三副四要記住
形副比替換
代詞格常變
定語從句難得見 冠何錯?介何錯? 冠詞介詞多少錯 連詞考并從 邏輯考一致 一加一減八處錯 形3 ---- 形容詞語法功能:可作 ①定語 ②補(bǔ)語 ③表語 形定補(bǔ)表 副4 ---- 副詞可修飾:①全句 ②副詞 ③形容詞 ④動詞 全副形動
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