2016高考英語短文改錯匯編篇一：2016年高考英語真題分類匯編 專題09 短文改錯(解析版) Word版含解析

2016年高考試題分項解析之專題9短文改錯

1.【2016·全國新課標I】短文改錯（10 分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。學科&網

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

【答案】

1. that →where2. but去掉 3. had →have 4. honest→ honesty 5. or→ and

6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a 9. our→ his10. stead→steadily

【歸納總結】在英語中though、although、while或者as等引導的讓步狀語從句不和but連用；連詞because不和so連用；此外，return不和back連用。

3. had →have 考查動詞時態(tài)。 文章是介紹現在的情況，應該用一般現在時。

4. honest→ honesty 考查名詞。此處是指誠實是他成功的秘訣，用名詞形式。 而形容詞honest意思是“誠實的”，是指人的性格特點。

考點：考查短文改錯

2.【2016·全國新課標II】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

【答案】

1.how改為what 2.chose改為choose 3.take改為taking4.but改為and 5.about后加the

6.your改為our7.knowledges改為knowledge8.刪除can或can改為should

9.thought改為think 10.many改為much

【解析】

試題分析：考查記敘文，“我”和同學們對暑假的旅游計劃的討論。

6.your改為our 考查代詞。應該使用our與本句的主語we保持一致。句意：如果我們出國旅游，我們就拓寬視野并學到書本上學不到的知識。

7.knowledges改為knowledge 考查名詞單復數。本句中名詞knowledge是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。

8.刪除can或can改為should 考查虛擬語氣。動詞suggest作為建議的時候，后面的賓語從句要使用虛擬語氣“(should)+動詞原形”,所以本句可以刪除can或can改為should。

9.thought改為think 考查時態(tài)。本文介紹我和同學們商量暑假旅游的事情，全文以一般現在時為主，所以本句使用現在時think。

10.many改為much 考查代詞。本句中代詞much代替不可數名詞much money作為動詞cost的賓語，而many通常代替可數名詞復數形式。

【名師點睛】

高考短文改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面。考點層次越高，就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層次的考點往往側重于語法方面的考查，而高層次的考點往往側重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。

一、詞法改錯

詞法的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復數和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣，情態(tài)動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區(qū)別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習慣用法。

例如：本題中的

5.about后加the 考查定冠詞

7.knowledges改為knowledge 考查名詞單復數

10.many改為much 考查代詞

二、句法改錯

句法的測試包括：主謂語在數上的一致性；名詞性從句、定語從句和強調句；句子結構的連貫性、完整性、對等性和邏輯性。

例如：

1.how改為what 考查特殊結構。

2.chose改為choose 考查句子結構

3.take改為taking 考查并列結構

8.刪除can或can改為should 考查虛擬語氣

三、語篇改錯

語篇的測試包括：上下文的時態(tài)是否一致；上下文中的代詞指代是否一致；上下文中的邏輯關系是否一致。

4.but改為and 考查連詞

6.your改為our 考查代詞和邏輯關系

9.thought改為think 考查時態(tài)

考點：考查短文改錯

3.【2016·全國新課標III】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

【答案】

51.year—years

52.worse—worst

53.the去掉

54.yourself—myself

55.such—so

56.tell—told

57.freely—free

58.wear—wearing

59.to—for

60.I ∧

need

55.such—so考查so/such的用法。 my parents didn’t seem to think so我的父母似乎不這樣認為，so指代上一句的內容，故把such改為so。

56.tell—told考查時態(tài)。通篇回憶過去的事情，使用的一般過去時，故把tell改為told。

57.freely—free考查形容詞副詞。be后跟形容詞構成系表結構，be free from...擺脫......，不受......的影響，故把freely改為free。

58.wear—wearing考查固定搭配。by是介詞，意為“通過”，后跟名詞／代詞或動名詞，故把wear改為wearing。

考點：名詞；形容詞；代詞；介詞；最高級；固定搭配；時態(tài)

【名師點睛】

改錯中動詞、連詞以及上下文語境也是出題者經常會考慮的出題知識點，其解題方法如下：

1.動詞錯誤的發(fā)現與解決

英語中有許多的短語動詞，是很難從字面上判斷其意義的。其中與介詞構成短語的動詞是最常

2016高考英語短文改錯匯編篇二：2016高考英語短文改錯薈萃

2016高考英語短文改錯薈萃

第一套

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling,

It is great pleasure to write to you. I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A few days before, I listened to a radio programme about you. Now I know that you teach English at home and in others countries before you started writing books. I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep, so you worked on them for five years. That was a very much difficult job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you. I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for spending time read my letter.

Yours sincerely,

Michele

第二套

Last week, there was a program calling “Learning to Respect Our Parents” in our school. That is known to us that respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese traditional moral value. And most students nowadays are “the only child”. We often think of themselves as the centre of their family.

As for the program, eight “dos” have worked out for the students to follow. For an example, we are advised to remember our parents’ birthdays. Beside this, it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when we go out. The program has been such successful that it has been high praised by many people.

第三套

One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided that we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they

would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.

第四套

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to the distance to look into happiness. But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.

第五套 I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper.

I’m written this letter to apply for the position.

I’m Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements:

for one thing, I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another,

I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad

if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

第六套

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly

death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said,” No, you had another 40 years.” On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had

another 40 years!” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”

第七套

One day, some children were playing hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate shouting. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me!” They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do that. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you.”

In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can’t swim. Help!” The children didn’t believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.

第八套

Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our school.

The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments in their spare time because it can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. What surprises me most is the number of the students paid much attention to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for 12% , although one is a best way to gain knowledge and the other to keep fit.

Therefore, many students are strongly advised to take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.

第九套

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a

speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

第十套

Last Friday, I learned a lesson about telling lies. Early in morning, I didn’t want to go to

school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off work to look for me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the true. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit to me. I felt so regretfully for telling lies. I had wasted anybody’s time. Finally, I admitted I had lied and promised never to do it again.

短文改錯參考答案

第一套

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling, a books

agotaught other it

of successful

reading

Yours sincerely,

Michele

【語篇解讀】本文是應用文，作者寫信給J.K.羅琳，表達自己對她的崇拜，以及期望自己

成功的愿望。

1. 【命題立意】考查冠詞。

【試題解析】“great”的前面需用冠詞a。

2. 【命題立意】考查名詞。

【試題解析】根據“all”可知，“book”需用復數。

3. 【命題立意】考查副詞。

【試題解析】幾天前應該用ago。

4. 【命題立意】考查動詞。

【試題解析】此處應該用過去時，表示以前曾經教過英語，teach的過去時為taught。

5. 【命題立意】考查形容詞。

【試題解析】“countries”需用“other”修飾。

6. 【命題立意】考查代詞。

【試題解析】此處代詞替代的是上文提到的第一本書，故用單數代詞替代。

7. 【命題立意】考查副詞。

【試題解析】“very”修飾形容詞，“very much”修飾動詞。

8. 【命題立意】考查固定短語。

【試題解析】此處考查固定短語be proud of。

9. 【命題立意】考查形容詞。

【試題解析】become在此句中為系動詞，后面應該用形容詞而不是副詞。

10.【命題立意】考查非謂語動詞。

【試題解析】此處考查固定短語spend time(in)doing something。

第二套

Last week, there was a program called is known to us that respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese It most students nowadays are “the only child” values But They often think of themselves as the centre of their family.

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As for the program, eight “dos ” have∧ worked out for the students to follow.

beenBesides it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when

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【參考答案及解析】

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5. 【語篇解讀】本文講述了在學校開展尊敬父母的活動并取得很大成功。 【命題立意】考查非謂語動詞。 【試題解析】calling與其所修飾的詞program 之間是被動關系，故改為過去分詞 【命題立意】考查主語從句中的形式主語。 【試題解析】此句為主語從句，形式主語用it，后接由that引導的真正主語 【命題立意】考查名詞單復數。 【試題解析】one of表示其中之一時 后面要用名詞復數，故用values 【命題立意】考查連詞。 【試題解析】上下文是轉折而不是并列。 【命題立意】考查代詞。

【試題解析】根據下文的themselves 和their來判斷。

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英語科試題短文改錯題一覽

課標卷-1

第一節(jié) 短文改錯（10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

答案：

71. that →where72. but去掉73. had →have74. honest→ honesty 75. or→ and

76. using →used 77. becoming前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily

課標卷-2

第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

答案：

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what need to spend

choosetakingand

money. But in that case, we will learn little about∧ world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden

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and gain we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we to places of interest nearby. I

knowledgeshould think much

課標卷-3

第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best

and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 答案: The teenage

worse

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浙江卷

第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪減或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！

My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.

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四川卷

第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving. 答案：

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