2016年高考英語短文改錯
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2016年高考英語短文改錯篇一：2016高考英語短文改錯集訓(七)
2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（七）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言
錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about
animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying
over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
Passage 2
Dear Miss Li,
I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many
difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.
Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Min
Passage 3
My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday，Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.
Passage 4
It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.
Passage 5
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I’d like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you. For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. Surely it is better if you have your own boots. Don’t forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnt. The hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally, I’d like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food
Passage 6
Here is a introduction to Beech School of English. Comparing with the other schools, I will think it is the best one that you can go to. First, it is very convenient of you to get there by train. Second, the school is small and the classes are very small, either. There are 24 teaching hours a week. Stay with an English family will provide you with a chance to practise your speaking
English and know more about the English family life. After class, you can enjoy sports and other activity with your classmates. The price is reasonably. I will get in touch with them you are interested in it.
Passage 7
Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but everything seemed to go wrong with myself. Fristly, the weather was awful. It rained every day but it was terribly cold. The hotel which I stayed was noisy any dirty and also very expensive. During I was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. When I go to the police they said they couldn’t do anything about it.
Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday. This year I’m staying at the home!
2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（七）答案
Passage 1
1. wanted后加 to 2. come改為 came 3. have改為 having 4. immediate 改為immediately
5. on改為 at 6 Neither改為 None 7 was改為 were 8. 去掉were 或looked 9.but改為 and
10. 將learnt后的a改為 an
Passage 2
1.student改為students2.studied改為studying3.of改為for4.that 改為which
5.are改為is6.you改為I7.effectively改為ettective
8.have后加a 9.去掉well 10.whether改為that
Passage 3 My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Lastdevotes Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until
classes deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday
deepsoOn morning, she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break. When
Soon they came up ∧a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyedwith
herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday， relaxed 去掉the Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said
and
what she had done was worthwhile.
Passage 4 It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the classgraduated that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time ∧ prepare. It was indeed not
in to easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a proper the precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the
remembering interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of uswethat
were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or
sent greeting card from different places.
cards
Passage 5
1.like 和 tell中間加to; 2. 去掉it 3.wants改為want4.must前加a
5.care改為caerful 6.booking改為booked 7.and改為but
8.another改為other9.what改為that 10.unusually改為unusual
Passage 6
第一句：a改為an
第二句：comparing 改為compared; 去掉will
第三句：of 改為for
第四句：either改為too
第六句：Stay改為Staying; speaking改為spoken
第七句：activity改為activities
第八句：reasonably 改為reasonable
第九句：you前加if
Passage 7
Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but
amazing everything seemed to go wrong with myself. Fristly, the weather was awful. It rained every day but
me and
it was terribly cold. The hotel which I stayed was noisy any dirty and also very expensive. During I
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was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. When I go to the police they thingswent
said they couldn’t do anything about it. Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay∧ the rest of my holiday. This year
Fortunately for
I’m staying at the home!
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2016年高考英語短文改錯篇二：2017年高考英語專項---短文改錯(含2016年高考真題)
2017年高考英語專項---改錯題
一、題型解讀：短文改錯題檢測考生發(fā)現(xiàn)、判斷、糾正文章錯誤的能力，進而考察學生的詞法、句法及行文邏輯等方面的水平，考察學生在語篇中綜合運用英語的能力。
二、命題特點：1）錯誤類型相對穩(wěn)定（錯詞、多詞、缺詞三種類型）2）考點覆蓋面廣、分布合理3）難度保持平穩(wěn)。
三、考查類型：錯詞、多詞、缺詞
四、考點分布
近三年高考短文改錯考點分布表
五、應試技巧：通讀全文，掌握大意；分句閱讀，整句找錯；反復通讀，復查驗證。
六、解題注意要點：
1. 核對錯項時，若的確有一時難以改出的地方，可以參考所改動項是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。即多一詞1個，缺詞1個，錯詞8個。
2. 核對改正的語法項目是否有重復。因為短文改錯往往覆蓋面廣，一般不會出現(xiàn)重復考查某個語法點的現(xiàn)象。
3. 核對答題符號是否規(guī)范，位置是否準確，看看有無遺漏符號，忽略字母大小寫和拼寫等問題。
2016年短文改錯匯編
Passage 1 (2016·全國Ⅰ)
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the Restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
Passage 2 (2016·全國Ⅱ)
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
Passage 3 (2016·全國Ⅲ)
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always
Passage 4 (2016·四川)
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now. Mom has a full－time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother's Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
Passage 5 (2016·浙江)
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
參考答案
A組 2016～2014年各省市高考題（改編）
Passage 1
1．that→where [考查賓語從句的連詞用法。由句子結構可知，介詞to之后為賓語從句。從句謂語是不及物動詞live。故用where引導。]
2．去掉but [考查從屬連詞與并列連詞。從屬連詞though不可與并列連詞but連用。]
3．had→ have [考查語境中的時態(tài)運用。根據(jù)上下文語境可知此處要用一般現(xiàn)在時。]
4．honest→ honesty [考查名詞作表語。由句意“他成功的關鍵是誠信”可知應當用名詞形式。]
5．or→and [考查并列連詞的用法。根據(jù)句意可知二者之間為并列關系而非選擇關系。]
6．using→used [考查固定短語的用法。be used for“用來做”，為固定短語。]
7．在dreams之后加上of或about [考查短語動詞。固定短語dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“夢想做某事”。]
8．the→a [考查代詞的用法。in a short period of time為固定詞組，意思是“短時間內(nèi)”。]
9．our→his [考查冠詞的用法。短文介紹了my uncle誠信經(jīng)營餐館的事情，故將our改為his。]
10．steady→steadily [考查副詞的用法。修飾謂語動詞用副詞。] Passage 2
1．how→what [考查疑問詞的用法。我和同學正在談論假期里做什么。固定表達what to do，如果用how結構為how to do sth.]
2．chose→choose [考查動詞形式。根據(jù)語法知識可知，情態(tài)動詞can后要用動詞原形。]
3．take→taking [考查非謂語動詞的用法。此處為between...and...結構，根據(jù)前面的staying at home可知，此處也要用動名詞形式，與前面保持一致。]
4．but→and [考查連詞的用法。如果呆在家里，感覺舒適，還不花錢。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應是并列關系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關系。]
5．world前加the [考查定冠詞的用法。此處特指我們所生活的這個世界。]
6．your→our [考查形容詞性物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)前面的主語we可知，此處要用our，表示“我們能夠開闊我們的視野”。]
7．knowledges→knowledge [考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法。knowledge為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式。]
8．去掉can或can→should [考查虛擬語氣。suggest表示“建議”，后面的賓語從句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有兩種改法。]
9．thought→think [考查一般現(xiàn)在時的用法。我認為這是一個好主意。根據(jù)上下文可知，此處并不是過去的看法，而是現(xiàn)在的看法。]
10．many→much [考查代詞的用法。這樣不會花很多錢。cost much花費很多。此處也可理解為much money的省略。]
Passage 3
【語篇導讀】 本文主要講述了青少與父母之間的關系。
1．year→years [此處指13～19 歲的年齡，故用復數(shù)。]
2．worse→worst [與前面的best并列，此處應用最高級。]
3．去掉the [at first 固定短語。]
4．yourself→myself [根據(jù)句意，此處指“我自己”。]
5．such→so [so 指已經(jīng)提到的事。]
6．tell→told [此處應用過去時態(tài)。]
7．freely→free [此處應用形容詞作表語。]
8．wear→wearing [此處用動名詞作介詞的賓語。]
2016年高考英語短文改錯篇三：2016高考英語短文改錯集訓(九)
2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（九）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言
錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights
of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.
Passage 2
Television plays important part in our life. It shows us information program, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment.
A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our influencing lives ever since.
Passage 3
Before I left my hometown to come to study in England,1 was partly terrified, and mostly I was excited. I was travelling all on my own to a place that I don't know any person at all. I couldn't even say the language well, but l wasn't going to let that stop me. Within a few month. after arriving in London, I fall in love with the city .I met some of the most amazing people from all over the world.1 wasn't quite preparing for the culture shock of a different place at the
beginning of. But after one and half years ,I am accustomed to living there .I have realized our views and ideas have changed completely in this country.
Passage 4
Cheetahs(獵豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.
Passage 5
Dear Andy,
I’m glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So I’m going to tell you about diet. I’m a very health person. That’s why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets. So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.
I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them to you. I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.
Passage 6
I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.
The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!
2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（九）答案
Passage 1
81 去掉had 82.of后面加the83.and改成but 84.lucky改成luckily 85.late改成later 86.car改成cars 87.去掉for 88.tried 改成trying 89. am改成was 90.that改成which
Passage 2
Television plays∧important part in our life. It shows us information program, likean programs the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the hear sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries andhappenteaches cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for anotherand other things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or evenlater play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our influencing
lives ever since.
Passage 3
1.and改為but2.that改為where 3.say改為speak 4.month改為months 5.fall改為fell
6.preparing改為prepared 7.去掉beginning 后of 8.half前加a9.there改為here10.our改為my
Passage 4
1. fast——fastest in the world提示我們要用最高級。2.running——run be able to 后用動詞原形
3.fastly——fast fast 既可以做形容詞，也可以做副詞，英語中無fastly。4.amazed——amazing –ed修飾人，-ing修飾物 5.去掉best favorite=like…best，這里重復，去掉best。 6. catch up后加上withcatch up with 追上；趕上 7.had ——has 短文整體時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。8. as——than 句中出現(xiàn)faster比較級，故用than。
9. a——an excellent example元音發(fā)音前用an。10. is——are several species是復數(shù)，故用there are。
Passage 5
1.ask改成asked 2.diet前加my 3.health 改為healthy4.why 改為because
5.and 改為but6.probable改為probably 7.rices 改為rice 8.去掉on
9.have 后加a10.for 改為of
Passage 6
1. before→ago 2.really ∧a huge lake 3.eye→eyes4.was volunteered 刪掉 was
5.took →put 6.off→ on 7.possibly→possible 8.exciting→excited 9.speed→sped
10.me→myself
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